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Well done, Solvalery (unique name, by the way :D) ! Though I found a couple of things that needed to be revised for grammatical mistakes, I believe Ranger51 has thoroughly ...

Hi :) Firstly, WOW. This is absolutely beautiful!I especially enjoyed And she who stood beside him Nineteen years of bliss. I couldn't really find anything worth pointing out but may ...

Hi, here to review you :) Firstly, How do we know where to look for this unseen object? Do we wander through a pile of mediocre rejects? "..a pile of ...

Hi there! I'm here to review your prologue :) Okay, I'll just begin with an overview of how I found this. It was quite interesting; this can be attributed to ...

Hi :) Overall, I think this poem was quite nice with just a few things sorted out. That's when my love for you started and came alive. Quite frankly, this ...

Hii (: Here to review :) Well, I must say, this poem is very beautiful. I felt really sad as the narrator talked about the bruises and how the girl ...

Hello, let's begin with the reviewing. Nothing. Is all I can use to describe what’s around me. The beginning is not quite appealing this way; it kind of makes the ...

WOw..JUST WOW! The list of contradictions just made me want to cry out of bitter delight! I was so "in to" this poem, I didn't even care for looking at ...

Hey! Okay, let's start. I ran up the stairs to get to the bottom I guess you did that on purpose. It actually sounds nice. w h ere I found ...

Let's start off! I really liked the concept of your work here; someone (whoever that is to you) right there so close to you, "under your skin". Let me introduce ...

Wow...just wow. This is really good and the only thing I could find.."not particularly appealing" to me was this: I try to go faster but my legs will not go ...

Hello, Huff Puff here to review you :) I'm not going to review your grammar or spelling 'cause I don't have the patience :P Your beginning was quite effective with ...

Hello! First of all: I carry all my burdens, my omens and my sins. They are always on me. They are my possessions of all things. I found myself coming ...

A very touching story indeed! The title acts quite effectively too and it was the title that made me read this piece. The last line is undoubtedly my favourite :) ...

I really liked the way you began this: I’ve always thought of what touching a cloud would be like It implies innocence, the thinking of a child who hasn't faced ...